From e4bdc283fd6cdeb2bf90b5a79a180fb19a8e9c63 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: David Baker Date: Mon, 19 Aug 2019 11:45:46 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] Apply suggestions from code review Typos / spelling Co-Authored-By: Hubert Chathi --- proposals/2140-terms-of-service-2.md | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/proposals/2140-terms-of-service-2.md b/proposals/2140-terms-of-service-2.md index 557376cc..78a682d7 100644 --- a/proposals/2140-terms-of-service-2.md +++ b/proposals/2140-terms-of-service-2.md @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ corresponding method that can be used with Identity Servers and Integration Managers. Requirements for this proposal are: - * ISs and IMs should be able to give multiple documents a user must agree to + * ISes and IMs should be able to give multiple documents a user must agree to abide by * Each document shoud be versioned * ISes and IMs must, for each request that they handle, know that the user @@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ Requirements for this proposal are: absolute proof (we will always have to trust that the client actually showed the document to the user) but it must be reasonably demonstrable that the user has given informed consent for the client to use that service. - * ISs and IMs must be able to prevent users from using the service if they + * ISes and IMs must be able to prevent users from using the service if they have not provided agreement. * A user should only have to agree to each version of each document once for their Matrix ID, ie. having agreed to a set of terms in one client, they @@ -265,7 +265,7 @@ in the current login sessions is: A client uses this client/server API endpoint to request that the Homeserver removes the given 3PID from the given Identity Server, or all Identity Servers. -Takes parameters the same parameters as +Takes the same parameters as `POST /_matrix/client/r0/account/3pid/delete`, ie. `id_server`, `medium`, `address` and the newly added `is_token`.